Monday, February 11, 2013
Let There Be Peace (Chapter 1)
Hai guise, Going to start a story. Called "Let there be peace" I really hope you chobots enjoy! (;
Chapter 1:
Long ago, In a world, where much people were not familiar with, was a place called "Chobots". Located right by the Milky Way. Now ,Chobots, have been located there, longer then Earth. Small, tiny, aliens roam this world. The aliens were known also as chobots. They are not evil, you see. However creatures called the "Nichos" are. Innocent chobots have sadly figured out that they are evil. For years, chobots have tried to have peace with Nichos, but more chobots missing in return. It has been like that for centuries, until one day, a new chobot came. Her name was BlueZoroGirl13. But her mother and father called her Blue for short. Blue was rather smart for her small age. She knew everything in less then a week. She knew more then her teacher, Mr. Choproff. Other students were jealous of her smartness, that they had grown to hate her. Although she did have 2 friends. A little boy, with light blue hair, named Pain, and a tiny little girl, with black hair, Vasa12345. (Vasa for short) Those two were also smart, and no one had liked them. So the three of them had stuck together. They were still little kids, as Blue, Pain, and Vasa walked to the academy for their class. To get there, there was the Mission agency. Blue loved walking by there. Although she had never been inside. Her mother told her it was meant for older, wiser, chobots. Blue didn't seem to think it was fair. "Hey guise, lets go inside." She said. Pain and Vasa, froze, dead on their tracks. "B-but my mother told me not to go in there." Pain says with frightened eyes. Vasa nods in agreement. "C'mon guise, what's it gonna hurt, to take a small peek?" She persuades them. They gave in easily, simply because they were tiny, and didn't know better. "Okay, Just a peek." Vasa says. All three of them walk towards the door. It quickly opens, and they jump. They continue to walk though. Passing several cow missions. "All it is, is cow missions." Pain states. Blue looks a bit further. "Wait! Look!" She says pointing at the Nicho Cave. "Okay, I am NOT going in there." Vasa says. Blue had also thought it was a bad idea, when suddenly the Nicho door whooshes open.
What do you guise think of chapter 1?
Stay Stylish
~Blue
What do you guise think of chapter 1?
Stay Stylish
~Blue
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3 comments:
haha, great, especially since i'm in there ;D cant wait till the next chapter!
Hey it's very good, but some grammatical errors. Good story though
I know, I will have to fix it later, i know it needs some editing, but i post it before i edit, because I know you guise want it faster. Thanks for the comment though!
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